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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() We have a mention of a Tom laughing because Todd said "shit" and his daughter Becky can read lips. Why is there a comma there? That sentence looks fine without one, so why is it there? What do you need a momentary pause for? Nothing is being explained as an aside. Stop telling us this and get on with everything! She riddled him with bullets (so says the text) and he's fish food. I don't need to be reminded of this constantly-I can remember things, my short term memory is fine, and I'm sure other readers' have perfectly working short term memories.Īnother thing repeated over the course of at least a page: Wesker being dead. I get it-the Arcadia is a converted tanker. First of all, I hate it when, as a reader, I'm constantly being beaten over the head with details. My ire starts when the actual story starts. Fabulous, because it's been a while since I've seen any of them. I liked how the prologue was formatted into short little "chapters" that recapped previous movies/events without making it seem like a boring recap. I don't know if this is the fault of the screenplay (because this is a movie novelisation) or just terrible writing but there were a LOT of problems with this and I don't necessarily want to blame the author, but maybe I need to definitely blame an editor. NOTE THAT I AM NOT FINISHED WITH THIS YET and I'm not sure I will because I am 76 pages in and the amount of problems I've found with this book are numerous. Really it doesn't deserve any, but I'm being nice, because I did like one thing. I WISH I COULD GIVE SOMETHING HALF A STAR BECAUSE THIS DOESN'T DESERVE A FULL ONE. ![]()
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